tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4652080078779954428.post4115739558457478373..comments2012-06-01T17:04:08.673-07:00Comments on "Multumeste-te sa fii om!": Cortina a cazut...Bohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08843762017639027500noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4652080078779954428.post-64625427676463759262010-08-08T04:36:36.937-07:002010-08-08T04:36:36.937-07:00misto introducerea. in continuare puteai sa folose...misto introducerea. in continuare puteai sa folosesti mai putin expresii cliseistice. cred ca puteai gasi alte cuvinte, alea care chiar se puteau confunda cu ce ai simtit in momentele alea. antiteza asta "Se aud pasi multi, ... Sunt pasii pe care ii auzeau toti cei inchisi aici.<br /><br />Era sunetul cel mai des auzit." e f buna.<br />in rest, felicitari pt pozeMoniquehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06087229590297555059noreply@blogger.com